The Finale

Changing some parts in the story is a good idea to shorten that lengthy piece of art. As I finished the book, I realized that the main problem is the interference of the so called “Gods ". The chapter that I will change is Chapter 3: How Menelaus and Alexandros fought a duel together, and what came of it.


Then Hector proposed both armies lay down their arms and let two men fight, the two men are Menelaus and Alexandros, also known as Paris. Menelaus agreed to it for he knew he was better than Paris. Paris may had some doubts on his abilities but with the help of his brother, he gathered enough courage and is determined to risk his life for the sake of Troy and for the sake of Helen. King Agamemnon, being the faithful king as he was, proposed to first offer gifts to the gods and make a pact that only Menelaus and Paris would fight and whoever wins would have his prize. The prize was Helen and all her wealth.

Menelaus and Paris prepared and armed themselves with the best armors they need and set foot on the battlefield. The heralds brought the gifts needed and King Agamemnon started the sacred ritual. The ritual went well. Menelaus and Paris then started the battle. It was an epic battle. No one could determine who was the better fighter. The fight lasted for a day and Hector stopped the fight for the men to rest. Agamemnon ,although wanted to know who wins and wants to end it there,agreed with Hector for he knows that if it lasts His brother might get killed.

They retreated and called it a day. Helen comforted and attended to Paris' needs.Menelaus, exhausted from the battle on the other side, ate and rested well but with anger in his heart knowing that it still is not finished. The day where it all ends came. Menelaus defeated Paris for he had rested while Paris lack sleep because he tire himself from some dirty acts. Achaeans cheered for they had won the battle. Hector gave Menelaus his prize and King Agamemnon made a truce between them. Ending the 10 - year conflict. King Agamemnon left and headed home while Hector and the Trojans rested and finally can breathe easily for they regained peace in their country.